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Mon Dec 10, 2012, 1:49 AM


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OMG Sweeties! So many comments XD I will answer the missings now and then I give randomly 50 points:

Thank you so much for this big big big feedback :huggle:




Hi sweethearts :3

I am in mood to give you some free pointies :D

Just comment here what you like about my art AND what you don't like. Later I will choose a winner among all  commenters :la:

I am so overwhelmed by all that awesome and nice comment :love:

You've already said:

- eyes on the characters a little more colorful
- foots of chibis too tiny
- hair style too simple
- more realistic stuff
- make MORE stuff
- coloring, some of images look too soft
- shading too basic
- improve anatomy
- white backgrounds I use to display your art
- background and eyes
- use darker tones more often
- try some more different things out of my zone
- eyes too big sometimes
- new poses, new facial expressions and more concepts



:star: BLOOOOORG :star:



Thankies!

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:iconaurorajohnson:
aurorajohnson Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Its ur own and its cutie :D
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:iconadeleeevee:
AdeleEevee Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
It's really cute! :)
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:iconcamillianna:
Camillianna Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Your art is the cute and the way of your coloring make me happy and feel good!~ I can't find what I don't like from your art ;-;
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much :huggle: ^^
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:iconcamillianna:
Camillianna Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No problem, love!~ :3
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:iconcbliss961:
cbliss961 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like: It is different and very kawaii desu~!
Don't like: Nothing is bad, to me, it's perfect~.
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thankies :)
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:iconcbliss961:
cbliss961 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are indeed welcome. 0u0
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:iconmusic-magma:
music-magma Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Your arts are truly amazing! :iconawwplz:
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thankies :)
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:iconmusic-magma:
music-magma Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
No prob :)
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:icondarknightwolf2010:
darknightwolf2010 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
all i can say that your art brings a smile on my face every time i see it
it's so cute !!! :la:
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awww thank you very much :)
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:icondarknightwolf2010:
darknightwolf2010 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem ;)
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:icontlk-simba-sandslash:
TLK-SIMBA-SANDSLASH Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Your art is amazing!! You only need to change the style of the hair when you do chibis, when taking a picture of the crafts; use less flash/white light because they reflect the light and it look strange.
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much for that comment :)
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:icontlk-simba-sandslash:
TLK-SIMBA-SANDSLASH Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem, it was a pleasure to help you!
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:iconscarffine:
Scarffine Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
U have Rare style :) & It Explane U'r self :meow:
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks :)
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:iconkiora-chan4:
Kiora-chan4 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your style ish awesome :D
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thankies :)
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:iconkingdarksoul:
KingDarkSoul Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconicameplz: i like your style it's so fabulous and cute C:
and well you should make the hair more fancy and shiny c: and also make the lines thick at some places c:
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the comment :)
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:iconkingdarksoul:
KingDarkSoul Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
no problem c:
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:iconahaha111:
ahaha111 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
I love how cute all your stuff is, the only thing I don't like is some of the eyes are too big...
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for your comment :D
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:iconcolorful--melody:
Colorful--Melody Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i love what you make ;v; its so cute!
i dont know what you can improve on but maybe just trying to make things better will make your stuff look really good. remember, do not rush! and take your time ^^
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankies :huggle:
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:iconcolorful--melody:
Colorful--Melody Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
ur welcome!! >U</
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:iconfloralprinted:
floralprinted Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
- eyes on the characters a little more colorful
To be perfectly honest, I do think the colors you use are a bit plain. Maybe you could add a color tint or more various colors? That'd be nice. Other than that, they're okay. c:

- foots of chibis too tiny
No, they're okay. :3 Chibis are mean't to be tiny. Cute and kawaii. Duh! <3

- hair style too simple
Just a little! Some look particularly similar to one another, so you might want to use more designs and ways to draw it.

- more realistic stuff
Whatever your style is, go for it! Just do you. Don't go with the flow!

- make MORE stuff
If you have time, certainly. Don't let your time be all put on dA. C: Have time for yourself, friends, family, etc.

- coloring, some of images look too soft
A lil' bit. I don't really have much to comment here, since whatever your style of drawing is is yours.

- shading too basic
If you think this, try to use tutorials and such to help you with shading types!

- improve anatomy
If it's chibis, don't worry. Just let us get one thing straight, feet don't go on heads. Just a warning. I've seen it happen. owo

- white backgrounds I use to display your art
Try nice, soft colors that would go with the art piece. Maybe that'll help?

- background and eyes
Honestly, you don't have to have a background. Just use simple colors. And the eyes you make are perf. vuv

- use darker tones more often
You don't have to, but whatever floats your S.S. Metterschlingel! c}:


- try some more different things out of my zone
Yeah! Try doing more like this. It helps on improvment. Step a bit out of your comfort zone. :3

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Other than that, your art is adorkable! I think it's super kawaii and toats adorable. <3
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww, thank you very much for that great comment :3

These points were points the other deviants gave me in this comments, not always that what I think ^^
But your comment was very helpful :huggle:
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:iconfloralprinted:
floralprinted Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem.
c:
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:iconlonerobin:
LoneRobin Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think your art style is adorable but you should practive realism at least a little to understand more of where stuff is supposed to go (In some pieces, legs are the wrong size or something is off in general).
Just study a photo of a human if you're drawing a human, etc. After awhile you'll get better.
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you ver much for thet comment :3
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:iconlonerobin:
LoneRobin Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :aww:
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:iconhanameii:
Hanameii Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Your chibi's are amazing~!
I really like how the animated ones blink, I know that those are hard to make, and I think that some people who've never tried just brush it off.
Even though I do this too, I think you should try a new poses, new facial expressions and more concepts to your art.
Overall, I think that your chibi's are amazing!!!! But, you should try to add more shazzam with the poses~
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thankies :la:
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:iconhanameii:
Hanameii Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Your welcome~
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:iconhoneyandsubject:
HoneyandSubject Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist
Your chibis. They're really cute, but they kind of give off a....girly-ish feeling. And you can't seem to find the eyebrows. The faces sorta look the same, though. Some of them are lumpy-ish, too. Like if you were tracing the others. Anyways, your art is very very adorable!! >w< Awesome job!
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for your comment :3
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:iconcreativeepicbunny:
CreativeEpicBunny Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Artist
Your chibis are super kawaii,the only improvement is that the eyes are kinda big and the feet need to be less thin :D
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thankies ^^
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:icondream-senpaii:
Dream-Senpaii Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
Your overall designs and output on pictures is amazing, however the eyes, feet and shading neeed inprovment.
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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:iconthe-lost-hope:
The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student General Artist
Well you asked so I shall tell what I think. What I like it is how cute, but I think yes you could to more colorful eyes. :)
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thankies :3
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:iconthe-lost-hope:
The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome :)
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:iconflowervanessa:
flowervanessa Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Your work is amazing. I especially love your crafts, as many cannot have the skills(&talent) to make such beautiful work. Your drawings are adorable, but there's room to improve!
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:iconmetterschlingel:
Metterschlingel Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thankies
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:iconmizuki-the-fluff:
Mizuki-the-fluff Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
I really like your chibis and I do think that many people have taken the simple out of chibi ^^; you've kept it and this may be a good thing or a bad thing, you can decide on that one:)
I do like the colors and wish that I could make cute bright little things but unfortunately most of my drawings are depressing and dark owo.
I'm not sure what I could say that would be bad and I feel awkward to since you are quite a bit older than I am which means that you're probably much more experienced with art than I am. I do however think that even though it is chibi and should be simple that the shading may be too simple. How you do it is nice but it also makes it look more cartoonish than chibi-like. And as far as anatomy goes, the humans to me look fine however dog and cat anatomy may use some work. I understand style but...I...don't know how to explain it, sorry ^^;

All in all I love your work and hope to see a lot more of it :la:
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